How the setting looks in my head:
How the description comes out on the page:
– A lot of you have asked questions pertaining to a struggle with planning scenes, so I’ve decided to make a little rundown of questions to answer before writing a new scene of your story. Obviously, you probably won’t end up going through this process over and over again until the end of your writing career, as this will become like a second nature to you as you continue to practice it. If you have any further questions, my ask box is always open. Happy writing!
Intention
How is the setting of the scene relevant to the events that take place?
Is this scene easy to follow with the information given to the reader?
What role do past events play into this scene?
How will the events in this scene shift the story toward the resolution?
Does this scene solve any plot holes or create any new ones?
Purpose
What is the overall purpose this scene serves?
How will this scene progress the plot?
How will this scene help to develop your character(s)?
Information
What information is this scene supposed to reveal to the reader?
What information is required to make this scene make sense?
Subtext
Are there any hidden messages you need to plan beforehand?
Is there any foreshadowing taking place during this scene?
What context might alter the implications of this scene?
What consequences might come from the events of this scene?
Starting Point
Does this starting point make sense for the trajectory of the scene?
Does the starting point allow room for some rising action?
Is your scene starting abruptly or with a build up to a large event?
Is there space between the beginning of this scene and the last?
If there is, are there any blanks you need to fill in to continue?
Tone
What is the main way you’ll be conveying tone in the context of the scene’s events?
How do you want the tone to impact the reader’s experience?
Does the tone change drastically in contrast with the last scene?
How Do You Want The Scene To Leave The Reader?
Do you want your reader to end the scene asking a bunch of questions?
Do you want one of the subplots to be resolved?
Do you want the reader to be shocked?
Do you want the reader to think, “Oh, that makes sense now”?
If you have any to add, feel free to leave them in the comments down below to help each other out!
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A comma splice walks into a bar, it has a drink and then leaves.
A question mark walks into a bar?
Two quotation marks “Walk into” a bar.
A gerund and an infinitive walk into a bar, drinking to drink.
The bar was walked into by a passive voice.
Three intransitive verbs walk into a bar. They sit. They drink. They leave.
Whoa! Amazing work as always! I love this so much!! 😍😍
Too adorable. Thank you for sharing it!
Casual Hana
Please, I am bored.
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I had a baby with Shale in camp and I cried.
Gee, I wonder why 😅
Dragon Age Story Generator. @a-shakespearean-in-paris & @kagetsukai thought you’d find this fun!
Last night I dreamed I unlocked a super secret mode in DA:I that let me play through the story as Cassandra.
That is too relatable.
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How hard was it to set the tone and environment for your horror/thriller?
It wasn’t terribly difficult but it was also a nightmare I had one night so I kind of just channeled my fear from the nightmare into the work hahaha It did take a lot of edits though and watching lots of crime shows and horror movies definitely helped! I also tried to keep it fairly realistic cuz I feel like there’s nothing scarier than something happening in real life
Sofia. She/her. Writer, thinker, listener, trans woman, and supporter of the Oxford Comma.
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