Davey Jacobs realizing that not only is Jack an idiot, but an idiot that he’s in love with
Circa 1899
Writing advice from my uni teachers:
If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.
Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.
Crutchie is such a gossip but like in a quiet sort of way. Like this mf regularly sees shit go down and then leans over to someone the next day and goes "I'm not one to speculate but..." and drops the hottest tea you've ever heard in your pathetic life
go write three sentences on your current writing project.
psst
hey you
you’re awesome never forget that
bye bye for now 👋
STOPPPP THANK U!!! this was the best thing to wake up to :')
It’s my birthday and I’m finally going to watch 92sies
the struggle ...
sorry to send 2 asks in 1 day but im reading thru all of ur drabble things and GOD your writing is so ELEGANT ....... idk how to describe it but reading it is like the same as floating through clouds ... like that makes no sense but it's genuinely like the best shit I have ever read ........... how the FUCK do you do that ...
PLEASE my guy i am only one man i am not wired to take this many compliments :(( but seriously that's really kind of you, sometimes i get a little embarrassed or feel like i'm being way too pretentious with the way i write so it's comforting to know people connect with it! i've been chugging along since i was,,, i think twelve? so almost nine years now? so it really does mean a lot :)
me when newsies
btw for the one with “blood” jack got into a fight it is not anything else
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