Writing From Scratch #8

Now THIS is art. 😍

Are you a “can’t write dialogue” writer or a “can’t describe anything” writer

Mr. Gaiman, I love your writing and your tumblr presence. If I can ask your advice, I’m a writer and I feel like I’ve lost inspiration for plot. I want to write emotions and relationships, but the story always escapes me. What do you do when you know your characters and how they relate to each other but not the story? Thank you!

The quickest way, if you have two characters you like and want to see succeed, is to have them want mutually exclusive things. And that’s a plot.

Fall Reading Reviews '15

Fall Reading Reviews ’15

Every season I have a list of books to read; you can find out more information under the Great Book List page.  This season I slightly overdid it with my commitments, but we’ll chalk it up to a learning curve. Below the read more are reviews (with minor spoilers) of Thorn Jack by Katherine Harbour, Fangirl by Rainbow Rowell, Flappers: Six Women of a Dangerous Generation by Judith Mackrell, The…

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Structuring a Series: Part IV

Structuring a Series Part IV: Follow-Up

Welcome back to Structuring a Series! This is mostly a follow-up to the rest of the blog series.  If you haven’t yet read Parts I, II, or III, or familiarized yourselves with Dan Well’s 7 Point Plot Structure, now’s a good time to do it! This installment is for structuring a series that is not a trilogy.  Using this structure is best for series with a serialized structure (or mythology arc)…

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Structuring a Series: Part I

Structuring a Series: Part I

Last Tuesday, my writing group did a mini-workshop of Dan Wells’s 7 Point Plot Structure, which is awesome and everyone not familiar with it should go check it out (if you don’t have time to watch the whole thing just now, I’ll go over the basics in this post, but I still suggest seeing his presentation for more details). Anyway, Two is trying to plot a trilogy, which got me thinking about how…

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Writing from Scratch #6: The Character Plot

The Character Plot

The problem of a Character plot involves a character’s worldview – their beliefs, values, desires, and fears. Many but not all stories include a Character plot, often called a character arc, in which a character’s worldview shifts. A Character plot is entirely concerned with the internal state of the character in question and as such is rarely seen on its own. When it is on its own, as it is in “Miss Brill” by Katherine Mansfield, you can end up with an extraordinary story.

Because a Character plot is entirely internal, the try-fail cycles don’t work out exactly the same as they do when dealing with an external/physical problem and solution; they are also up for interpretation by the reader when done subtly and beautifully as in “Miss Brill.” Character plot try-fails are often not even done intentionally as typically the character does not realize a change in the worldview needs to occur. So, read “Miss Brill” (it’s short, less than 2,000 words) and try for yourself to determine the problem – it’s not stated directly – and identify the try-fails. After, you can read over my interpretation, please let me know in the comments how our thoughts compare!

The Problem of Miss Brill’s Worldview: Miss Brill is incredibly lonely, and she doesn’t realize or acknowledge it.

First Try: Miss Brill cleans up and puts on her fox fur. Fail: Yes, Miss Brill recognizes for a brief moment that she is sad, but she doesn’t realize why and puts it out of her mind.

Second Try: She sits on her regular bench in the park and tries to eavesdrop on the old couple sitting nearby. Fail: No, the old couple don’t speak, and Miss Brill doesn’t attempt to interact.

Third Try: Miss Brill people watches everyone in the park. Fail: Yes, she sees the other older men and women sitting alone and still as statues around the park watching everyone else, but she doesn’t see that she herself is one of those people.

Fourth Try: Miss Brill watches the woman in ermine. Fail: No, she completely misses the similarity between herself and woman, and the woman in ermine is more determined to take action than Miss Brill.

Fifth Try: Miss Brill loses herself in a fantasy about everyone in the park, including herself, being a part of a play or performance. Fail: No, she clearly overestimates her importance, believing that everyone would miss her if she failed to show up on Sunday afternoon, and although she fantasizes that they have reached some common enlightenment or understanding, she doesn’t know what that understanding is.

Final Try: Miss Brill eavesdrops on the young couple. Solution: No, Miss Brill feels lonelier than ever, but she still won’t acknowledge it.

Prompt: write a flash fiction with a Character in which the plot-problem is the worldview “asking for help is a sign of weakness” and the plot-solution is the worldview “asking for help is a sign of strength.” Remember to keep the focus on the internal state of the character even as the character takes external actions. You’ll decide on the character, the setting, and the genre, as well as what are the stakes if the worldview doesn’t change and what is preventing the change from happening immediately.

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Writing from Scratch #12: Compound Plots, Part 2

Compound Plots, Part 2: Parallel Plots

Parallel plots share a lot in common with subordinate plots. As with subordinate plots, parallel plots occur simultaneously – the individual problems and their solutions should be introduced and resolved at roughly the same time. However, parallel plots can be divided from each other and stand on their own, unlike with a subordinate plot which is dependent on the principle plot for its try-fail cycles.

“Parallel plots” is a bit of a misnomer. “Parallel” comes from the idea of parallelism in sentence construction because parallel plots often act as mirrors to one another or two sides of the same coin; they often work on each other indirectly to strengthen or emphasize the Thought of the story. What we don’t want to do is fall into the trap of thinking that the plots cannot intersect; although you should be able to separate them into their own stories, in a single story, they are meant to work together.

Superhero stories have parallel plots a plenty with the main character dealing with a plot-problem as their civilian identity and dealing with a different plot-problem as their superhero identity. We’ll look at one of these examples, Spiderman: Homecoming. Peter Parker is dealing with a Character plot in overcoming his lack of confidence to ask Liz out on a date; meanwhile Spiderman is dealing with an Inquiry plot involving the sale of alien tech weaponry on the streets. These do have points of overlap – they should for effective storytelling. However, if you take the Inquiry plot out of the story, you have a rom-com/coming-of-age story with a complete plot of no confidence to ask Liz out to yes confidence to ask Liz out. If you take the Character plot out of the story, you still have Spiderman investigating the origin of the alien tech weaponry.

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Writing from Scratch #7: The Event Plot

The Event Plot

The problem of an Event plot is a disruption to the status quo. The solution comes either from setting everything right again or adapting to the change. The Event plot is probably what most people think of when they think “what is a plot?” Any story that deals with a life-changing or world-changing event is an Event.

The first plot I analyzed, from The Expanse television series, is an Event plot. Let’s look at another: The Princess Diaries. As we did with Lord of the Rings, we’ll look at the movie rather than books because more people will be familiar with the movie (which is a damn shame).

The Event: Mia Thermopolis’s grandmother tells Mia that she is the princess of small European kingdom Genovia, and she must take the throne.

First try: Mia tries to reestablish the old status quo of being a nobody by running away from her grandmother to her mother’s house. Fail: No, she is not allowed to ignore that she is a princess, and she must undergo “princess lessons.”

Second try: Mia tries to adapt to the new status quo of being a secret princess by taking princess lessons and letting her best friend in on the secret. Fail: Yes, Mia gets a makeover and goes to a state dinner, but she is kind of a mess emotionally and embarrasses herself.

Third try: Mia tries to ignore everything that is happening to her status quo. Fail: No, everyone knows she’s a princess now, and because horrible school bullies school-bully she is a laughing stock.

Fourth try: Mia tries to run away from the city to avoid reestablishing the old status quo by renouncing the crown or adapting to the new status quo by accepting the crown. Fail: No, she doesn’t successfully run away, and she arrives at the ball looking like a drowned cat.

Final try: Mia tries adapting to the new status quo by accepting the crown. Solution: Yes, Mia adapts to being a princess, and she impresses everyone with her speech.

Prompt: write a flash fiction with an Event in which the plot-problem that disrupts the status quo is a marriage proposal. How a marriage proposal would disrupt the status quo is up to you. You’ll also choose the character, setting, genre, and stakes, as well as what is preventing this status quo from being reestablished or adapted to immediately. This simple plot can create a story from a rom-com to a fantastical action-adventure.

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